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No, it's lowercase in that use.

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The form revenue very often can be used for the plural as well as the singular. In your example, I think revenue would work throughout. It's also true, though, that the form revenues with the s can be used to indicate money from more than one distinct source. 

In your example, either form is OK. I'm not sure if that's comforting, or disturbing ...



 


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Five-star hotels ...

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Thank you! I've fixed it. 

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Here's the people of color section of the race-related coverage entry. We don't use people of the global majority, unless in a direct quotation, as the term is not widely used or recognized.

people of color The term is acceptable when necessary in broad references to multiple races other than white: We will hire more people of color. Nine playwrights of color collaborated on the script.
Be aware, however, that many people of various races object to the term for various reasons, including that it lumps together into one monolithic group anyone who isn’t white.
Be specific whenever possible by referring to, for instance, Black Americans, Chinese Americans or members of the Seminole Tribe of Florida. Examples: The poll found that Black and Latino Americans are bearing the brunt of the pandemic’s financial impact, not people of color are bearing the brunt of the pandemic’s financial impact. Most of the magazine’s readers are Black women, not most of the magazine’s readers are women of color.
In some cases, other wording may be appropriate. Examples: people from various racial and ethnic backgrounds; diverse groups; various heritages; different cultures.
Do not use person of color for an individual.
Do not use the term Black, Indigenous and people of color, which some see as more inclusive by distinguishing the experiences of Black and Indigenous people but others see as less inclusive by diminishing the experiences of everyone else. Similarly, do not use the term Black, Asian and minority ethnic.
Do not use the shorthand POC, BIPOC or BAME unless necessary in a direct quotation; when used, explain it.

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As you note, our new primary dictionary, Merriam-Webster, prefers the unhyphenated version: handpicked. We will go with that preference and will delete the hyphenated version from the main section of Stylebook Online. Thanks for noting it.

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Merriam-Webster uses the style sign-off for the noun,  ... formal sign-off by users ...

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We don't have any guidance on that. What you did looks good, but we abbreviate Dec. with the date: Dec. 19, 2023. We also lowercase public hearing.

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That sounds like an excellent alternative.

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In that construction, you actually need commas for the essential phrase: Canada's new prime minister, Justin Trudeau, is sworn in
Or: New Canadian Prime Minister Justin Trudeau is sworn in
Justin Trudeau sworn in as Canada's prime minister

Not that this is new news, of course!

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We (and other experts) don't use a comma or capital letter for most partial quotes within a sentence, since they blend into or flow with or are integrated as part of the sentence as a whole.

That said, the combination of three speakers/writers being quoted in one sentence is awfully hard for a reader to handle. I don't know why my predecessors didn't add a cautionary note to that example. But I am going to add one ... sometime, when I have a chance. Thanks for bringing it up.


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Correct. 

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We'd use the commas if we used that abbreviation (which we don't). But if you need to use it, I'd use the commas. We'd also use headline style for the capitalization, but you can choose to use our style for composition titles if you prefer.

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Yes, we announced a change in style a few years ago, removing the requirement to hyphenate between double-e combinations (any of those combinations, not just reelection). This was to bring us in line with what the major dictionaries do, as well as common usage.

A revised prefixes entry announced last month incorporates that change as well as a few others. It's worth a look!


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We spell out numbers when they start a sentence. But it's much better to rephrase to avoid that situation. Assuming it's not exactly $44 million: about $44 million, at least $44 million, almost $44 million, more than $44 million ... whichever is accurate could be used to start the sentence.

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Question from Williamsport, Pennsylvania, on May 13, 2024

Is it "destress" or "de-stress"?

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de-stress

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We use figures for ratios (1 in 4 voters). But I wouldn't consider your example a ratio. So I'd use words: adults with more than four of eight conditions. And we definitely wouldn't use the > symbol.

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During the COVID-19 pandemic.

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Such pressure! Such (imagined) power! You have my support in this fight. Woah yeah!

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the Falklands.

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I'd put it either at the beginning of the list or the end.

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Spell out four fatalities.

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I'd hyphenate it.

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AP overall doesn't have an opinion. My opinion is that each term is OK but they have different tones. The first version seems more neutral, less judgmental. The second may be OK for informal writing or for a particular effect.


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