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Ask the Editor questions from the past week:

Q. Do you put quotation marks around short story titles when writing about them? – from Wichita, Kan. on Mon, Mar 30, 2015

A. Yes, short story titles are enclosed in quotation marks.

Q. Would it be obsessive-compulsive disorder or obsessive compulsive disorder? many thanks! – from Carlsbad, Calif. on Mon, Mar 30, 2015

A. Hyphenate obsessive-compulsive as an adjective, per your example, or as a noun: He is obsessive-compulsive.

Q. Hello, I have a question about the use of a vs. an. Which of these sentences is correct? 1) She is a member of a 1,800-member group. (Read: one thousand, eight hundred.) 2) She is a member of an 1,800-member group. (Read: eighteen hundred.) I know the sentence could be rewritten, but the newsroom is wondering if there is a rule for such cases. Thank you! – from Quincy, Calif. on Mon, Mar 30, 2015

A. No. 2 is correct. Use "an" before a vowel sound, which is long a ... as in ay-teen or 18.

Q. Would military training be capitalized? For example, "After graduating from Advanced Individual Training, she joined the Peace Corps and..." – from New York on Mon, Mar 30, 2015

A. Lowercase advanced individual training.

Q. More on "less" ... For example: Co-ops were developed to bring electric services to less densely populated areas of the state. No hyphen, right? Thanks. – from Richardson, Texas on Mon, Mar 30, 2015

A. Correct.

Q. Hello, This is the second time I have written to you. I can't find the answer to my question on the AP Stylebook site and AP is the arbiter of choice for my manager. When creating written media, i.e. pamphlets, posters or bill inserts, is the convention to display the internet address with, or without, the www. prefix. Thank you! – from Bellingham, Wash. on Mon, Mar 30, 2015

A. Render the address in the same form as written by the owner. An example in the printed AP Stylebook's bibliography for National Geographic Atlas of the World: http://www.nationalgeographic.com/index.html

Q. How would AP style the childhood game of Duck, Duck, Goose? All caps? Any quotation marks? – from Farmington, Maine on Mon, Mar 30, 2015

A. Lowercase such traditional games, a la hide-and-seek.

Q. Is super glue a trademark? Or should it be superglue? – from Milwaukee on Mon, Mar 30, 2015

A. It's super glue as a generic term.

Q. When using a date in the sentence, should the word "on" be included before the date? For example, is it: "A blood drive was held in the gym March 23" or "A blood drive was held in the gym on March 23." ? – from Woodbridge, Va. on Mon, Mar 30, 2015

A. Not in your example. See the "on" entry for elaboration.

Q. In writing about earthquakes, is "fault" capitalized in San Andreas fault, and is "plate" capitalized in "the Pacific plate which is being pushed into the North American plate" Thanks – from Huntington Beach, Calif. on Sun, Mar 29, 2015

A. Capitalized formally named geological formations, such as San Andreas Fault and Pacific Plate.

Q. Which is correct: A whole-food, plant-based diet A whole food, plant-based diet A whole food plant-based diet Or some other combination? Thank you! A whole food – from Albany, N.Y. on Sat, Mar 28, 2015

A. A whole food, plant-based diet ....

Q. What about event titles, such as a concert title or an art exhibition title? E.g. Global Beat Festival, or Smile! A Photo Anthology. Quotes? Italics? Only capitalization? – from New York on Sat, Mar 28, 2015

A. In AP news stories, event titles and exhibition names are generally enclosed in quotes, with primary words usually capitalized. The generic name of a recurring event often isn't enclosed in quotes. AP doesn't use italics in news stories.

Q. Can you say a congregation who or should it be a congregation that? Thanks for responding. – from LAKE MARY, Fla. on Fri, Mar 27, 2015

A. A congregation that ...

Q. When putting state postal codes in alphabetical order, would it be organized by state name ( Illinois then Iowa--IL., IA) or by abbreviation (IA, IL)? Thanks! – from Clinton Township, MI on Fri, Mar 27, 2015

A. The state names would no doubt accompany the abbreviations, so alphabetize by full spellings.

Q. Is it appropriate to put a comma after the word preceding the word "by"? For example, "The leaders facilitated discussion, by partnering with local government officials in advance." Someone uses this very frequently in their writing, but it seems inappropriate to me. – from Chicago on Fri, Mar 27, 2015

A. UPDATE: no comma after the word discussion in that sentence.

Q. When referring to a job promotion, would you say, "....has been promoted to xx from xx" or "from xx to xx"? – from Chicago on Fri, Mar 27, 2015

A. Often the new development is placed first in such sentences: ... has been promoted to xxx ... from xxx.

Q. Is the apostrophe in 'others' correct: ... ensuring your loved one%uFFFDs and others%uFFFD safety is a top priority. – from Encinitas, Calif. on Fri, Mar 27, 2015

A. Correct.

Q. When you include a question in quotes within the middle of a sentence, do you capitalize the first word? Example sentence (should the "S" in So be capitalized?): When someone asks, "So what does your company do?" you want to be able to have a clear, consistent response and make a good impression. – from Radnor, Pa. on Fri, Mar 27, 2015

A. Correct. And make the response a separate sentence: You want to be able ...

Q. Which is right here: University of Wisconsin System president Ray Cross informed system campuses that, due to proposed budget cuts, OR: University of Wisconsin System president Ray Cross informed system campuses that, because of proposed budget cuts, – from , Wisconsin on Fri, Mar 27, 2015

A. Traditionalists would probably prefer "because of," though "due to" is acceptable. Incidentally, if it's a formal title, President would be capped preceding Ray Cross.

Q. I have a list of military branches. Is it acceptable to use MARINES in that list (Air Force, Army, Navy, Marines)? Or should it always say MARINE CORPS? – from San Antonio on Fri, Mar 27, 2015

A. That service branch would no doubt prefer Marine Corps in your listing.

Q. Thank you for your new entry on suicide. I appreciate your position on "death with dignity." What is your position on "right to die," particularly if one is referring to proposed legislation that would confer a legal right to doctor-assisted suicide? – from Pasadena, Calif. on Fri, Mar 27, 2015

A. Unless the actual name is at issue, AP would refer to proposed legislation to legalize medically assisted suicide.

Q. Should we say, "Cook 50 to 60 minutes." or "Cook 50-60 minutes."? – from Chicago on Fri, Mar 27, 2015

A. Either way.

Q. Hi! Would I put "every two to three weeks" or "every two-to-three weeks" ? Thank you! – from Fort Worth, Texas on Thu, Mar 26, 2015

A. Every two to three weeks, or a two- to three-week period.

Q. Is it 12-bar blues or twelve-bar blues. My sentence: [Joshua] Redman is invited to play with a traditional Chin musical group. %uFFFDI tried to call a 12-bar blues, but they encouraged me to instead get with their groove,%uFFFD Redman recalls. – from New York on Thu, Mar 26, 2015

A. AP uses the figure for numerals 10 and above.

Q. I see that "live stream" is the preferred term for what appears to be the noun version of the phrase. What about usage as a verb? "The app allows people to live stream anything." Seems to me, it would be "live-stream" in this case. No? – from Salina, Kan. on Thu, Mar 26, 2015

A. Yes, live-stream is often hyphenated in verb usages.

Q. Do comic strip titles require quotes? A 2009 response says yes, but a 2013 question said they don't, and that position wasn't contradicted in your response. Please clarify. – from Salt Lake City on Thu, Mar 26, 2015

A. Comic strip titles are enclosed in quotes using the "composition titles" guidance.

Q. Hello! Need help with less or fewer. There are less/fewer transactions than last year. Thank you! – from Houston on Thu, Mar 26, 2015

A. There are fewer (individual) transactions than last year.

Q. When referring to the people of Argentina, is the demonym "Argentinian" or "Argentine"? – from New York, New York on Thu, Mar 26, 2015

A. Argentine is the preferred term for the people and culture of Argentina.

Q. What is AP style for the Internet of Things? Thanks. – from Rockford, Ill. on Thu, Mar 26, 2015

A. It's the "Internet of Things" in AP technology stories, meaning Internet-connected products.

Q. When a transgender person prefers the pronouns they/them, should editors use singular or plural conjugations? Example: Smith, who uses the pronouns they and them, says some strangers assume they (is/are?) a teenage boy, others that Smith is female. – from Boston on Wed, Mar 25, 2015

A. Try rephrasing. Smith, who uses the pronouns they and them, says some strangers assume they means (or refers to) a teenage boy, others that Smith is female.

Q. Is there a AP preference between the use of "cellphone" and "mobile phone"? If so, under what circumstances? – from Los Angeles on Wed, Mar 25, 2015

A. No stated preference, though cellphone has become the commonly used term.

Q. In using consecutive years, which usage is correct, 2014-15 or 2014-'15? – from , San Antonio, Texas on Wed, Mar 25, 2015

A. The first.

Q. Wanted to outpoint possible conflicting information. I was trying to figure out whether we need to hyphenate %uFFFDridesharing%uFFFD when describing Uber, Lyft, etc. One entry says to use one word, but then the other entry says not to use the wording at all -- and that similar descriptions should be hyphenated. What%uFFFDs the correct style? Thanks much! Erin, CER Ask the Editor results: Q. Do you write "ridesharing program" or "ride-sharing program"? Thom, Oklahoma City A. Different localities use one or the other spelling, based on AP stories. The trend seems to be to the one-word compound ridesharing. Q. What is current AP style for ride-sharing, car-sharing and bike-sharing programs? The following story uses both "ridesharing" and "ride-hailing" to describe Lyft: http://bigstory.ap.org/article/4092100f8aff469ab7a043e09dddbbc8/suit-claims- lyft-cheated-new-drivers-out-1000-bonuses My understanding is that car sharing (hyphenated as a modifier) is correct, so I would style ride sharing and bike sharing in the same way. But the following Ask the Editor reply implies that "ridesharing" is trending: http://www.apstylebook.com/online/?do=search_results&search_term=ridesharing What is current AP style, two words or one? A. Ride-hailing services such as Uber and Lyft let people use smartphone apps to book and pay for a private car service or in some cases, a taxi. They may also be called ride-booking services. Do not use ride-sharing. – from Chicago on Wed, Mar 25, 2015

A. The Stylebook's "Uber" entry hyphenates ride-sharing, ride-booking and ride-hailing. However, some localities have used the one-word spelling for ridesharing.

Q. It's OK to say this: ... someone who's been there before Instead of: ... someone who has been there before – from Encinitas, Calif. on Wed, Mar 25, 2015

A. Yes, the contraction who's can mean who is or who has. Also, see the Stylebook's "contraction" entry for guidance.

Q. How do I make U.S. possessive? – from Washington on Wed, Mar 25, 2015

A. Write out United States' ... or use the abbreviation U.S. as a descriptive rather than possessive: the U.S. team.

Q. Subcommittee on Surface Transportation is not the full name of the panel. Should initial letters of Subcommittee on Surface Transportation be lower-cased? – from Arlington, Va. on Wed, Mar 25, 2015

A. Lowercase spelling looks right for the shortened name. See the "subcommittee" entry for elaboration.

Q. Does early onset dementia need a hyphen? – from Chicago on Wed, Mar 25, 2015

A. No hyphen in that term.

Q. I've seen the entry for FORMER as in "former President Bill Clinton." But is the use of the word "then" also appropriate, for example when referring to an action a former official took while in office. "In 2013, then Mayor Jane Doe issued an executive order." I'm worried that using the word "former" suggests that Jane Doe was not the mayor when that happened, but leaving out "former" or "then" may seem to some people that Jane Doe is still the mayor. – from Seattle on Wed, Mar 25, 2015

A. In 2013, then-Mayor Jane Doe issued an executive order. Or: In 2013, Jan Doe, then the mayor, issued an executive order.

Q. In a sentence with a parallel list, is it okay to imply parts of a phrase after the first phrase in the list? For example, is the following correct: "California will have 1,234 fewer dentists than are needed, Florida 1,152 fewer and New York 1,024." – from Washington on Wed, Mar 25, 2015

A. Yes, but better to write ... and New York 1,024 fewer.

Q. What would AP do with the section of the Appalachian Trail called the Hundred-Mile Wilderness? – from Farmington, Maine on Wed, Mar 25, 2015

A. As a formally named area on the trail, the Hundred-Mile Wilderness.

Q. A quick check of the government website, studentaid.ed.gov, indicates the correct name of the federal student loan for undergraduates and graduates is Direct PLUS Loan. When referencing this loan, please clarify whether it's correct to lowercase the "f" in "federal" in a sentence like this: "ABC Bank's DEF Loan offers a better rate than the federal Direct PLUS Loan." Your response is very much appreciated. – from Bridgeport, Conn. on Wed, Mar 25, 2015

A. It's correct to lowercase federal when used as an adjective to distinguish something from state or other program. See "federal" entry for details.

Q. I was searching for the word, "Teamwork," and read the following entry in the "Ask the Editor" section: Ask the Editor results: Q. Which is correct? Team work, Teamwork or team-work? from St. Peters, Mo. on Apr 09, 2012 A. It's one work, teamwork. Did you mean to say "It's one word, teamwork."? Sorry, I just thought I should ask. – from Naperville, Ill. on Wed, Mar 25, 2015

A. Yes, it should be one word, not one work.

Q. Is the adjective form for duty free hyphenated? Ex: Duty-free chain Thank you – from Virginia, XX on Tue, Mar 24, 2015

A. Yes, hyphenate the adjective duty-free.

Q. Would you say "the countries with the highest pace of life" or "the countries with the highest paces of life"? And what about "cost of living" vs. "costs of living"? – from Tokyo on Tue, Mar 24, 2015

A. ... countries with the fastest pace of life ... countries with the highest cost of living.

Q. Should foreign currencies in similar constructions as the following one be hyphenated? A 10-billion-yen plan to ... Or should it be -- a 10 billion yen plan Thank you – from Virginia, XX on Tue, Mar 24, 2015

A. ... a 10 billion-yen plan.

Q. I've seen AP use antiretrovirals and antimalarial drugs, but then anti-epileptic drugs. Which are correct please? – from Bethesda, MD on Tue, Mar 24, 2015

A. AP medical writers don't hyphenate antiretroviral, using the Webster's dictionary spelling. Using the Stylebook's "anti-" guidance, hyphenate anti-malarial and anti-epileptic.

Q. Is it Lunar New Year or Chinese New Year? – from Baton Rouge, La. on Tue, Mar 24, 2015

A. Both capitalized spellings are used.

Q. Handpainted figurine or hand-painted figurine? Thanks! – from Las Vegas on Tue, Mar 24, 2015

A. AP stories prefer the hyphenated spelling.

Q. I cannot find an entry for the proper use of the noun for businesses organized under sub-chapter S of the IRS code. Is it S corporation or S-corporation? – from Trenton, N.J. on Tue, Mar 24, 2015

A. A recent AP story from Washington used S-corporation.

Q. Is it correct to use "individuals" in this sentence, or should the word "people" be used: Skills training will be provided to individuals caring for older adults in the home. – from Little Rock, Ark. on Tue, Mar 24, 2015

A. Either works or perhaps caregivers.

Q. When preparing a report, if you have included as part of the report header "Report Prepared For: Mr. Smith, Homeowner," do you need to qualify Mr. Smith as the homeowner the first time he is referenced in the body of the report? – from thornton, Pa. on Tue, Mar 24, 2015

A. Yes, and this suggested rephrasing of header: Report prepared for Mr. Smith, homeowner

Q. Should the term "assets under management" be capitalized? – on Tue, Mar 24, 2015

A. An AP story wouldn't capitalize this description.

Q. Is it correction officer, corrections officer, or correctional officer? – from Johnson City, N.Y. on Tue, Mar 24, 2015

A. Various governmental websites use correctional officer, corrections officer and correction officer. Use the spelling that prevails in a specific jurisdiction.

Q. Does the title "Federal Reserve governor" take the abbreviation "Gov." before an individual's full name on first reference? – from Charlotte, N.C. on Mon, Mar 23, 2015

A. See this link for the titles: http://www.federalreserve.gov/aboutthefed/bios/board/boardmembership.htm#governors

Q. Can you please settle this? Should we write "University of California, Los Angeles," (or Berkeley, or Irvine) or "University of California at Los Angeles?" Part of my question also is about the comma AFTER the city, if the rule is to just use the city without at. – from Eugene, Oregon on Mon, Mar 23, 2015

A. Generally written University of California, Berkeley without a comma after the city unless followed by a subordinate clause or phrase: The University of California, Berkeley is a member of the Pacific-12 Conference. The University of California, Berkley, which belongs to the Pacific-12 Conference, ...

Q. Is it "requester" or "requestor"? Your answer of "correct" to a 2011 question asking "Should requester/requestor be -er just like adviser/advisor?" makes no sense. I tried a word ending pattern (e.g., -st), but I can make both "protester" and "investor." I work for a government agency using plenty of legal language, so I'd like the answer to be firmly one spelling or the other. – from Pittsburgh on Mon, Mar 23, 2015

A. Is this clearer? Requester, which is the first spelling in Webster's New World College Dictionary, the Stylebook's main reference.

Q. Do academic and policy journals need to be italicized, left alone or need quotes around them? – from HARRISONBURG, Va. on Mon, Mar 23, 2015

A. AP news stories don't enclose the titles of academic and policy journals in quotes. No italics in news stories, though other publications may italicize titles in their own style.

Q. Marsala is a capitalized when it comes to wine. Does that mean it's also capitalized when used in a dish like chicken Marsala? I didn't see a reference in the Food Guide. Thanks! – from Chicago on Mon, Mar 23, 2015

A. Marsala is capitalized as the proper name of the Sicilian seaport associated with those culinary specialties.

Q. As a noun, sneak peek or sneak-peek? Thanks! – from Dallas on Mon, Mar 23, 2015

A. Generally spelled without a hyphen.

Q. While I would use "put the device in the palm of their hand," others are leaning toward one of the phrases below. Which is correct if we use the plural (hands)? Put the device in the palm of their hands. Put the device in palms of their hands. – from Albany, N.Y. on Mon, Mar 23, 2015

A. In the sense of sharing one device: Put the device in the palm of their hands.

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