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Ask the Editor questions from the past week:

Q. I need help dealing with a question that acts like a compound modifier: "How should you answer the 'what state would you like to work in' question?" Is this punctuated/capitalized correctly? Unfortunately rewriting is not an option. Thanks! – from US on Tue, May 31, 2016

A. It's clear as written as a quote within a quote.

Q. I saw that with the change to lowercase internet, that the inclination will be to also lowercase internet of things. Would this affect the acronym IoT? – from Cullman, Ala. on Tue, May 31, 2016

A. The abbreviation would remain IoT, though the full term seems to be preferred in AP uses.

Q. Re: Eskimo vs. Inuit. The AP Eskimo, Eskimos guideline states that the term "Inuit" is used by some instead of "Eskimo" and directs subscribers to follow preferences of those involved in the story. When writing general research (e.g., health risks for Eskimo/Inuit people), which term is preferred? Is there a meaning difference? Is "Eskimo" offensive? Should it never be used? The Alaska Native Language Center says "Eskimo" is derogatory (https://www.uaf.edu/anlc/resources/inuit-eskimo/). Business Insider says it%uFFFFs racist (http://www.businessinsider.com/offensive-phrases-that-people-still-use-2013-11). Please clarify which term to use or never use for general use. – from Rochester, Minn. on Tue, May 31, 2016

A. AP stories use either term, depending on the situation or expressed preference. When an AP story from Alaska uses the term Eskimo, it's often paired the group's ethnic name: Inupiat Eskimos, a Yup'ik Eskimo community, a Cu'pik (CHOOP'-ik) Eskimo, etc. The Stylebook's "Indians" entry also notes that in Alaska, the indigenous groups include Aleuts, Eskimos and Indians, collectively known as Alaska Natives.

Q. Where can I find the proper punctuation for Spanish words? For instance, Se habla espanol. Is the tilde used? – from Harrisburg, Pa. on Tue, May 31, 2016

A. Consult a Spanish dictionary for accent marks. AP English language stories doesn't use diacritical or accent marks because they cause garbles in some computer systems.

Q. Must "ensure" be followed by "that" in cases where the infinitive form of the verb is used? So, for example, in this sentence: "She took a headcount to ensure that all the governing body members were in attendance." Or should it be "She took a headcount to ensure all the governing body members were in attendance"? Thanks! – from Portland, Ore. on Tue, May 31, 2016

A. See the "ensure, insure assure" entry for an example that doesn't use that.

Q. Is the following punctuation correct? Companies are scored in these key areas of financial performance and business management: product and service quality, innovation value as a long-term investment, soundness of financial position; ability to attract, develop, and retain talent; community responsibility, wise use of corporate assets, and effectiveness in conducting a global business. – from Edina, Minn. on Tue, May 31, 2016

A. Use a semicolon after each separate example rather than mixing semicolons and commas.

Q. What is the rule for two series in the same sentence? For example: "Join Joe, as he shares a fun, easy and quick recipe for a delicious, fudgy and chewy chocolate brownie." Are semicolons necessary? – from Liverpool, N.Y. on Tue, May 31, 2016

A. No semicolons and no comma after Joe.

Q. Hello, Would you put Kung Fu Panda in quotes, if it's in reference to an object, such as an action figure or a balloon? A Kung Fu Panda balloon or a "Kung Fu Panda" balloon. Thank you – from Virginia, XX on Mon, May 30, 2016

A. In reference to the latest movie, it would be a "Kung Fu Panda 3" balloon. But if it's a generic use of the name, quotes

Q. The punctuation entry does not address my question: How do I punctuate a possessive proper business name when I'm referring to two of its outlets? The store name is Lappert's. I want to refer to both-- i.e., "this is happening at the local Lappert's' stores" Is it Lappert's'? Lapperts'? Thank you. – from Palm Springs, Calif. on Fri, May 27, 2016

A. As a plural, the local Lappert's stores.

Q. Good Day, when noting time of day in a publication, should I use "5 a.m. and 6 a.m.," or would it more properly be "5 or 6 a.m.?" Thanks. – from Phoenix on Fri, May 27, 2016

A. Use a.m. with both: 5 a.m. and 6 a.m.

Q. I've been unable to find the answer to my question in either the archive or in Webster's New World. Should the "c" in "capitols" be in lowercase when referring to "state capitols"in a sentence? Many thanks, Gayle Vance – from Albuquerque, N.M. on Thu, May 26, 2016

A. Yes, lowercase the plural usage. See the PROPER NAMES section of the Stylebook's "capitalization" entry for guidance.

Q. OK, this is why Ask the Editor is the source of so much angst. I submitted the following question, and you responded as shown below. Q. Why don't you just remove the Ask the Editor question about punchline (answer for which says two words) when below it says it should be solid per the dictionary?%uFFFF from Chicago, on Tue, May 24, 2016 A. In the only Q&A, it's punch line, two words, as spelled in the dictionary. But on the AP site, if you look, it shows below the only Q&A you noted: Webster's New World College Dictionary results: punchline (Source: Webster's New World College Dictionary) punch %uFFFF l?n %uFFFF n. the climactic line, typically the last line, of a joke or humorous anecdote So, what gives with your response? – from Chicago on Thu, May 26, 2016

A. I now see that Webster's New World College Dictionary, Fifth Edition, changed the spelling to punchline, one word, from punch line, two words, in its Fourth Edition, which was the primary go-to reference before 2015 when the spelling first came up. Generally AP defers to the current NWCD dictionary spelling when a term isn't in Stylebook. Thanks for pointing it out.

Q. Regarding businesses, I understand the rule to not use all-capital-letter names unless the letters are individually pronounced: BMW. What about private or non-profit entities, such as theater groups, i.e. STAGES St. Louis? – from St. Louis, Mo. on Thu, May 26, 2016

A. Using guidance in the CAPS, PERIODS section of the "abbreviations and acronyms" entry, it would be Stages St. Louis. Use only an initial cap and then lowercase for abbreviations and acronyms of more than five letters, unless listed in the Stylebook or Webster's NWCD.

Q. In this example, is "ABCD" considered an appositive that requires commas? "Members will partner with the non-profit organization ABCD to support the cause." – from Towson, MD on Thu, May 26, 2016

A. The name is essential information so it shouldn't be set off. Also, it's nonprofit by the Stylebook spelling.

Q. How should one refer to the historical Hewlett-Packard companies? Like, for example, a story is referring to HP as a longtime customer; the old Hewlett-Packard Co. was a customer, and the new HP Inc. and Hewlett Packard Enterprise remain customers. But an explanation of their history isn't really relevant to the story. Would "the Hewlett-Packard companies" work? – from Boise, Idaho on Thu, May 26, 2016

A. The formal name is now HP Inc. on first reference. If an additional explanation is needed, formerly named the Hewlett-Packard Co.

Q. I have a 70-page publication that has small paragraphs set apart throughout that start with the word NOTE: in all caps and bold for emphasis, but the rest of the text is normal, not bold. I am being asked to italicize each full note. Is the use of italics frowned upon for entire paragraphs? Our readers are at a 6th-grade reading level on average. – from Madison, Wis. on Thu, May 26, 2016

A. That's a typographic design decision. AP doesn't use italics in news stories because of transmission issues. However, the printed AP Stylebook uses italics for examples within the individual entries to contrast with regular body type.

Q. Would a chain headquartered in Canada be "Canada-based" or "Canadian-based"? (I see "British-based" in a stylebook entry, but I wouldn't describe something based in Texas as "Texan-based.") – from Memphis, Tenn. on Thu, May 26, 2016

A. Yes, Canada-based is the more precise term. In the AP news archive, stories using Britain-based far exceed the other form.

Q. If you have two consecutive dates, would you use a hyphen or the word and between them? For example, May 26 and 27, 2016, or May 26-27, 2016? – on Thu, May 26, 2016

A. The year is rarely needed with calendar dates within the same year. May 26-27 suffices.

Q. How should one attribute a quotation or information from a webinar, when you don't know the name of its creator? – from , Kansas City, Mo. on Thu, May 26, 2016

A. AP would determine the organizer of the webinar and verify the information or quotation before using.

Q. Should the "every day" clauses be separated with semicolons not commas in the below direct quote? Based on the semicolon entry in the punctuation guide I think technically they should be, but I think that takes away from the "I'm reminded..." part of the quote that they lead up to. Thanks! "Every day I pass through the gates, every day I see a beret out there, every day I see a patrol car out there; I%uFFFFm reminded of what we do." – from AE, AP on Thu, May 26, 2016

A. "Every day I pass through the gates. Every day I see a beret out there. Every day I see a patrol car out there. I'm reminded of what we do."

Q. Hello, when quoting written material from sources such as other magazines or newspapers, do you keep their capitalization? Your "Quotes Within Quotes" entry doesn't cover this per se, although it does say to follow standard writing style. But if another publication chooses to capitalize certain terms, such as "First Lady," for example, I feel that changing that to conform to style is changing their voice. But not changing it would be confusing if the term also appears in non-quoted material a different way. I'm sure you will say to just not do this, which is sensical and obvious enough, but it's not an ideal world, and sometimes it's unavoidable. – from Boston on Wed, May 25, 2016

A. You're probably referring to "quotations in the news," which advises Stylebook users to follow basic writing style. Because first lady isn't an official title, it's lowercase in AP news stories, including quotes. However, when quoting historical documents, such as the Declaration of Independence, AP would use those spellings and capitalizations.

Q. Hello, when saying that someone can be reached on Twitter at their twitter handle, do you say "at @twitterhandle," or do you leave off the first "at" and just say, "You can reach twitter handle @twitterhandle"? – from Boston on Wed, May 25, 2016

A. Omit "at" before @twitter .

Q. In numerical ranking, of say, students, for example, should we follow the usual rules for numerals? "The top students who finished first and second received awards, but the ones who placed 10th and 11th were recognized, too." – from St. Louis, Mo. on Wed, May 25, 2016

A. Correct.

Q. I'm confused about the noun for time-share ... or is it timeshare or time share? Webster's seems to say it should be time-share -- which conflicts with what you've recommended in the past. Am I reading Webster's definition wrong? Thanks! – from Centreville, Va. on Wed, May 25, 2016

A. In the absence of a Stylebook entry, we generally defer to the dictionary. Previous Q&A's here were based on Webster's New World College Dictionary, Fourth Edition, which listed time sharing and time share as nouns and time-share as the adjective. In the Fifth Edition, published in 2015, Webster's NWCD changed to time-share (n.) and added hyphenated verb forms: time-shared, time-sharing. This edition also has a separate entry for the American noun: time sharing.

Q. Is there any rule for how to abbreviate a plural with (s) [e.g., fellowship(s)] when the word ends in a -y [e.g., residency(s)]? Should is be residency(s), residency(ies) or just spell them out, residency/residencies? – from Orlando, Fla. on Wed, May 25, 2016

A. The plural is residencies using WORDS ENDING IN Y guidance of "plurals" entry.

Q. Is making descriptors parallel writer's preference or an English rule? For example: "The girl was fetching, daring and full of charm" should be corrected to "fetching, daring and charming" to match present participle? Also, "Mary likes hiking, swimming and to bicycle" should be "hiking, swimming and bicycling." – from Atlanta on Wed, May 25, 2016

A. Use the form that's clearest for the context. In the first sentence, "full of charm" seems more expressive than "charming." In the second example, the parallel form "bicycling" seems more natural than "to bicycle."

Q. The question regarding former and ex-Marine was not answered. (response here: http://www.apstylebook.com/online/?do=ask_editor&id=31559). Please answer the question. As a Marine veteran of 11 years, I take offense to the term "ex-marine", as it is only reserved for those who are expelled from our Corps. "Former Marine" is acceptable, however it's better to say "former active-duty Marine", to clarify that the individual is no longer active-duty. "Once a Marine, always a Marine." – from Shrewsbury, MA on Wed, May 25, 2016

A. Yes, AP avoids ex- in this context. Generally AP uses retired for career Marines or former for those who served in the Marine Corps, in which active duty would be understood.

Q. non-swimmers%uFFFF pools or nonswimmers%uFFFF pools? – from AE, AP on Wed, May 25, 2016

A. The second.

Q. Could I shorten "... are adding 35 million to 40 million Takata inflators to the recall" to "... are adding 35-40 million Takata inflators to the recall"? Or perhaps "35 to 40 million"? – from Tokyo on Wed, May 25, 2016

A. OK to express this range as 35-40 million ...

Q. Should it be "Farm to Table" or " Farm-to-Table" as a stand-alone subhead in an article? – from Orysia McCabe, Middletown, N.Y. on Wed, May 25, 2016

A. The Stylebook entry is farm-to-table.

Q. Is English as a Second Language capped, or is it English as a second language? I've been lowercasing it, but I more often see it capped when spelled out. Thanks. – from Bohemia, N.Y. on Tue, May 24, 2016

A. English as a second language on first reference, then ESL may be used on follow-ups.

Q. Does AP recommend deep-seated or deep-seeded (as in, "take on deep-seated social issues")? – from Waltham, MA on Tue, May 24, 2016

A. Deferring to the dictionary listing: deep-seated.

Q. Is self-published hyphenated as a verb? In Webster's New World College Dictionary it has the term hyphenated but does not specify whether thats as a verb or as an adjective. – from AE, AP on Tue, May 24, 2016

A. Yes, the adjective and verb forms are hyphenated.

Q. Would AP cap bhakti yoga or the practice of kirtan? – from Farmington, Maine on Tue, May 24, 2016

A. In a single use in the AP news archive, Bhakti yoga was capitalized. A few uses of kirtan were spelled lowercase.

Q. Are teams capitalized or not? Should it be "The Thunderbird Rodeo Team is proud to compete." OR "The Thunderbird rodeo team is proud to compete."? What about the Thunderbird Women's Basketball Team OR the Thunderbird women's basketball team? – from Casper, Wyo. on Tue, May 24, 2016

A. An AP story would capitalize Thunderbird, the team name, but generally lowercase the sports type, such as rodeo team or women's basketball team.

Q. I just saw this question and answer in the "Ask the Editor" section: Q. I know that degree names are not capitalized. EX. master of science in nursing administration. But a program title is. EX. Georgetown University's Master of Science in Nursing Administration Program. But what about a specific degree? Is that a proper noun? EX. Georgetown University's Master of Science in Nursing Administration degree. Are my examples correct? %uFFFF from Farmington, Conn. on Wed, Apr 20, 2016 A. In an AP news story, the degree would be written Master of Science in nursing administration. Of course, George Washington University is also capitalized. I was under the impression that if the word degree were added then the subject of the degree would be capitalized as well:Georgetown University's Master of Science degree in Nursing Administration. Is this wrong? – from Casper, Wyo. on Tue, May 24, 2016

A. The degree specialty is lowercase unless it includes a proper noun: e.g., master's degree in English literature.

Q. In the situation of describing a purchase, should it be full-price purchase or full-priced purchase? – from Mason, Ohio on Tue, May 24, 2016

A. Customarily it's full-price purchase.

Q. What is your feeling regarding the use of "American" vs. "U.S. resident"? I have instructed writers to use the latter, since naturalized citizen certificate numbers are likely not requested when gathering stats about how many people have wallpaper in their homes, but it sometimes sounds awkward: "Nine out of every 10 U.S. residents has impacted wisdom teeth." But we can't call them Americans, can we, since we don't know the circumstances of their birth or their immigration status? – from Silver Spring, MD on Tue, May 24, 2016

A. When that information isn't known, there are various formulations to use: e.g., nine of 10 people in the U.S. or nine of 10 U.S. households.

Q. A few months later Nancy had a successful surgery. %uFFFFNurse Jill made my 3-day hospital stay a breeze,%uFFFF she raved. Is it "3-day" or "three-day"? – from Kalamazoo, MI on Tue, May 24, 2016

A. Spell out three-day hospital stay.

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